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oh, love!
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:23:12 PM in AEST
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oh, love! why do you leave me live my life alone?
sans mate nor heart in warmth of his embrace? my home
and life have never known these but a minutes breath-
oh love, you have abandoned me whence i shant know it;
for now it is too late; no longer am i young.
oh, love! why is it that me thinks of what could be?
ever wishing you to join me in my world; where art thou?
why do you leave this mind and soul to ponder, wander,
so many years spent missing love; when i should have
been kissing, love.
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Re: oh, love!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:23:59 PM AEST
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Nessa, my dear, we are never to old and few hearts ever get to cold to love. One day it is going to come to you again and it may not be the firey passionate love of youth but it will be quiet and peaceful and contented and last forever.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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so beautiful and longing..........
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:50:48 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is such a beautiful write. I love the picture, it makes the whole poem. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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Re: oh, love!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:02:28 AM AEST
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I know how deeply from your heart this was penned ((nessa)). Such sadness my dear friend, I wish I could ease your pain. You know that even though I may be silent at times, I am always here for you if you need me.
Roses
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Re: oh, love!
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:53:47 PM AEST
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| awesome write you got here...but so sad... |
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Re: oh, love!
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by venkat on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:04:03 AM AEST
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| Oh, dear Ness..you are always warm and friendly..but the love of men is really cold in the world..hugs..:-) venkat |
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Re: oh, love!
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by Merry on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:15:57 PM AEST
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love might surprise you when you least expect it - a lovely romantic write and who knows who might read it.......
smiles
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:19:19 PM AEST
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oh nessa.. this is so beautiful.. so sad.. so beautiful..
charlotte xxx |
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Re: oh, love!
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:16:03 PM AEST
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Very beautiful but heartbreaking. I too know how this feels in relation to my life. Great write.
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Re: oh, love!
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:06:34 PM AEST
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Sad but good work.
luv the graphics.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: oh, love!
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:10:00 PM AEST
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oh this was just so beautiful.
i love how its written. the picture was pretty cool too. i love everything about this poem.
just amazing.
Arden |
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:05:50 PM AEST
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So sad, and yet so amazing beautiful and magical
*hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs*
lots and lots of hugs for you nessa
your a star
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 11:20:02 PM AEST
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| great write lady! This is love at it's finest |
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:49:11 PM AEST
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That last verse was pretty powerful,it's like the cherry on the banana split,it completes it perfectly.I love your poetry,it's unique in it's own genre and your flow of words is exceptional.May the lead in your pencil(or emotions of your heart) never run out on such great poetry.
Beautifully done as always,
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:53:37 PM AEST
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| "To fall in love with love, what longing" What a poem! |
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by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:27:40 PM AEST
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Wow i like this poem alot. And thanks for the comment that means alot to me, because I have been reading your poems and they are really good!
Anita |
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by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:37:48 PM AEST
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Feeling the longing in this verse nessa...this piece has a wonderful classical style to it...very beautiful...
Lena |
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