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My Sweet Confusion
Contributed by
shahan
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Then the day comes,
All the ties are torn forever.
The sound of end echoes everywhere.
Everything, everyone bears
The seed of destruction.
Reality- the sudden certain reality,
Really denies itself.
The future circles round the present,
And the past is born again.
Only illusion exists.
Really?
Illusion creates an illusion again.
Hatred lives forever.
And it ends in an emptiness.
Darkness touches the sky,
The rotten love creates
Only the smell of ugliness.
Then the day comes again,
All the ties are joined again.
Copyright ©
shahan
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2004-05-01 20:10:48]
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Re: My Sweet Confusion
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:16:45 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought provoking write.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Sweet Confusion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:20:26 PM AEST
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| wow, this was a very nice poem, I enjoyed it a lot. |
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