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They Just Don't Understand...Do They?
Contributed by
Dereku
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I didn't do it for the
Attention I might get
I didn't do it so she'd see me
But I will make a bet
That she thinks I'm crazy
And I won't prove her wrong just yet
I did it to see if
I might just exist
People say I'm crazy, but that's just a myth
I am very sane, maybe they missed
The point to all of this
Which is to see, if I could lift
The pain that takes me now
The pain that does not allow
Me to live my life
The pain that takes the knife
The pain that gives me strife
Copyright ©
Dereku
... [
2004-05-01 22:08:39]
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Re: They Just Don't Understand...Do They?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:26:03 PM AEST
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Sad but true and very well written.
the more u rythumn the easier it get's
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: They Just Don't Understand...Do They?
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by bernard on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:39:19 AM AEST
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Your rhyming is alright just a little more practise so that it gets a better flow you are doing well do not worry about your rhyme that comes easy to some people others have a hard time making anything rhyme.
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Re: They Just Don't Understand...Do They?
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:46:52 PM AEST
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| This Is Good. Keep Up The Good Work |
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