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There's beuty in the body
Contributed by
voiceinthewilderness
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:15:55 PM in AEST
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So intricate and detailed I am
Such beuty represented, imparted to man.
would my nose be made upward, Id drown in the rain,
or my earholes made bigger, risk harm to my brain!
And surely my senses are able to speak,
from the itch in my ears to the pain in my feet.
There is art in my veins,in the body so grand,
were I to number them all, alike they would be to all grains of sand.
But can all grains of sand match the beuty of my hand?
May it never be, as the body is indeed so very grand!
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Re: There's beuty in the body
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:38:25 PM AEST
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Yes... I agree there is beauty in the body... good job... well written... except for one small detail how the word beauty is spelled... sorry about that but I had to say somehing... not nit picking or anything lol
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Re: There's beuty in the body
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:47:58 PM AEST
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aww this is adorable... and cute i loved it and the flow was nicely done... i think i like this line the best tho... would my nose be made upward, Id drown in the rain, im gonna start telling snobbing ppl that ... haha... okie maybe not lol
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Re: There's beuty in the body
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:22:41 PM AEST
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I'm with you. My initial belief in God came from the wonder of intelligent design. I like this.
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