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Cosmic Fibrosis
Contributed by
Contralogicus
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:19:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Give me cosmic fibrosis
Resonate delirium
Red sky hastily painted
Black clouds are still
To be sketched in.
Throw down your mustard seed,
Let it lay where it lands.
Dont shed a single tear
When angry vines encroach
The helpless mustard seeds.
Give up on God
Be the Prodigal Son,
Murderer, thief or liar, then
Repent while hanging
From a cross.
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Contralogicus
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2004-05-02 01:19:04]
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Re: Cosmic Fibrosis
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:16:33 AM AEST
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it lost it's rythym at
"When angry vines encroach
The helpless mustard seeds"
but I liked it anyway... good job |
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Re: Cosmic Fibrosis
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:24:06 PM AEST
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sooner or later, it may not be an option. repenting, that is.
good job.
thanks for sharing |
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