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Retrogenesis

Contributed by Loyalist on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:44:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

If I break down who I am
turning in-to old man
Some say some day we'll end
Almost too numb to stand

Midnight is when my day began
Slowly I watch second hand
No time to find my friend
I tried know you can't

Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee

And though I've had my blast
I can't change the past
inside I can't laugh
If I break down and crash

Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee

and when the winter comes
impossible dreams
impossible it may seem
to everyone and on and on

and the the water flows
impossible dreams
awesome though it may seem
to everyone and on and on we dream

If I break down who I am
accepting what I can
Some say some day is here
Almost to dumb to care

Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee
Come back to meeee

and when the winter comes
impossible dreams
impossible it may seem
to everyone and on and on

and then the water flows
impossible dreams
awesome though it may seem
to everyone and on and on
to everyone and on and on
to everyone and on and on we dream

Copyright © Loyalist ... [ 2004-05-02 05:44:39]
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Re: Retrogenesis (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:44:22 AM AEST
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this is good, but i just think that it needs a bit more work on it. for one thing, its a little to short to be a song, and the lyrics are repeated alittle too much, otherwise you've done a good job. i like this.

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