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Your Sin
Contributed by
reilt
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:58:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Soft neath the shade.
It's all brwath and skin.
And tangled in your hair,
The scent of last night's indiscretion.
Though sweet,
Your tongue is catching mine
In lies.
I fight a fear
I haven't known
Since a forgotten time.
You look so ******* beautiful,
I'm leaning towards
Forgiveness.
Because I can't argue
And I can't deaden the urge
To bend at your touch.
So soft neath the secret,
I let it pass into the night
Unsaid.
Your sin, unspoken, undone
As you, all desire and want,
Do me.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-02 07:58:41]
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Re: Your Sin
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:14:38 AM AEST
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What can I say about a poem that makes me catch my breath? You write beautifully. You express your deepest feelings with such reality. I don't know how else to say this. Splendid.
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Re: Your Sin
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:39:45 AM AEST
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| Other than the content (*) very good poem, nice style |
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