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The forgotten trash can
Contributed by
reprobate
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A survivor. That's the tag these days
Holding on despite life's insipid ways
But am I truly what it says
Despite appearances of being strong
I fear I'm here where I don't belong
In a place so not right and a time all wrong
Yet I am here, battered and scarred
All I see and feel is jaded and marred
Standing up has become so very hard
Yes, I have withstood onslaughts so unkind
Vicious assaults on my heart, soul and mind
Still, I believe I was just left behind
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reprobate
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2004-05-02 10:46:39]
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Re: The forgotten trash can
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by bleeding_chains on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:44:44 AM AEST
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| this is a sad but beautiful poem . i love it. |
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Re: The forgotten trash can
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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Melancholy. I'd love to see the charcoal that goes along with it. Very insightful. Fantastic write.
Bravo and encore!!!
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: The forgotten trash can
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:08:28 PM AEST
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| Y, know, it's hard to tell whether the poem is about a trash can or a person....very, very interesting imagery. |
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Re: The forgotten trash can
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:16:00 PM AEST
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| brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa |
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