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Dark Child, Demon Eyes
Contributed by
Black13
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hatred resonates through this lonely dark child;
Evil penetrates deep into her soul, anger rages wild.
She hunts, to fulfill her lusts, bringing torment to prey.
Charming words and empty promises deliver only death today.
Eyes that sear the soul easily crumbling resistance.
Reverse crucifixes to help end their existence.
Nails bite flesh, while she promises much worse pain;
Ended only when she ceremoneously slices open veign.
Greedily drinking of life's sustain
death from her will never be mundane.
And though her kiss maybe sublime;
you'll never be free of her sinful crime.
Know that is she chooses on you to dine;
that hell had best suit you just fine.
One more thing that should be said;
she does not sleep, but must be fed.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-02 12:28:35]
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by arden on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:52:38 PM AEST
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hmmm... im keeping my mouth shut lol
this was awesome. very chilling and dark the rhyme was awesome. i really love this poem.
wonderfully done.
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:13:28 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful.. wow.. so dark and evil and i love it..
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:33:04 PM AEST
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I think you know exactly what to do.
Very dark stuff.
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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I think the dark child should come to the light for a while and get some color to her skin and sparkle back in her eyes. She has been in the dark too long.
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:12:10 PM AEST
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Hehehe... the first two lines sound awfully familiar. Anger rages wild... yeeah! The rest of it doesn't really do anything for me though. But I do like the way you word things.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Dark Child, Demon Eyes
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by blueheart on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:38:16 AM AEST
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| Amazing write, brilliantly worded. So chilling and evil. Great piece. |
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