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Apart
Contributed by
Kelsey
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:22:35 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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They were so happy i thought
But now she's caught.
Now their not together
And this i'll have to live with forever.
It stays on my mind
The answers to my questions i need to find.
Why not a year ago? Why so soon?
Together yall were the stars and the moon.
Never to seperate, never to part
But i hope yall know this is tearing me apart.
I don't know what to do
Or even who to turn to.
Yall make me choose sides
Sometimes i just wanna get away and hide
I just wish all the drama would end
So my heart can slowly mend.
From knowing we'll never be a happy family ever again!
Copyright ©
Kelsey
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2004-05-02 18:22:35]
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Re: Apart
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by blackmarker on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:28:09 PM AEST
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Awww, my family went through the same thing.. I wrote about it too.. I'm sorry you feel that way, but keep on writing, it will help you feel better!
Great poem, well written, so truthful.. |
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Re: Apart
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:33:58 PM AEST
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Great poem... I've got a friend going thru the same thing and she mirrors ur feelings here...
Thanks for sharing... Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Apart
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by lonely_kakashi on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:34:40 PM AEST
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Hey im sorry your goin through this, i've been through this too, only difference was i was 4 at the time, but still it is hard and does take alot to get through but things will settle down once the anger between them has subsided.
Brought back a couple of painful memories,
Well done ( for the poem, not the painful memories :D )
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Kakashi |
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