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Smoking My Cigarette
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:13:55 PM in AEST
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Smoking my cigarette,
Calming me down,
From whatever turned my brow,
Calming me from within,
Clearing my thoughts,
Resting my mind,
Bringing me through my worst times,
I come to rely on the cancer stick,
So straight and white,
To think that this thing could kill me,
Of I do regret but I am not ready,
Not ready to give up,
'cause my pain has only really started,
And the stress,
Dont even get me started,
Money worries personal problems,
Its always been my friend,
To give me my nicotine fix,
So I dont go round the bend,
It keeps me going,
Stops me from overflowing,
Calming my nerves,
While all the time,
Killing me from the inside.
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2004-05-02 19:13:55]
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Re: Smoking My Cigarette
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:27:31 PM AEST
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| As the old saying goes we all have to die sooner or later and that we shall for none of us are immortal. like you i might die through sucking on a cancer stick but i'd sooner die doing what ever i enjoy doing than fighting to stay healthy.. if you can undestand what i mean... nice write the words flowed quite nicely i thought |
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Re: Smoking My Cigarette
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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Shame on you, putting your life in danger like that. It is nothing but a big pacifier for sissies. You all use the excuse you use it to relax. Well stick a straw or a pencil in your mouth and chew on it instead. It is a sin to take your own life and essentially that is exactly what you are doing, killing yourself. I am an ex smoker so I do know of what I speak. Best thing I ever did for me. Surely you aren't tired of life yet. It is much better than the alternative.
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