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Sickness
Contributed by
Randibee85
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:03:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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~~~~~
I wanted grey
But my happy clouds floated away
Tell me I'm pretty
Delusions in society
Like what's in you...
I'm not pretty
Eating too much or not enough
Crawling on my belly
Sickness!
I'm death
Bloody, baggy mess
Tell me again
I secretly scream
Tell me that I'm pretty
~~~~~
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Re: Sickness
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:58:45 PM AEST
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| Really well done! I hope you get your freedom! |
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Re: Sickness
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:23:57 PM AEST
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| By the very fact the you can struggle, says you're beautiful! And your writing reflects it. May your struggle be short. Thanks for sharing a lovely piece! |
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Re: Sickness
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:00:02 PM AEST
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The fact that you can write about your pain, shows the courage you have in dealing with your e.d.....you will make it !
Blessings
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Re: Sickness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:38:58 AM AEST
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wow! deep stuff impressive.
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