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no longer safe from the rain
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:46:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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this cant be the end
the end of our love
the end of what we had
how can this be
with tears streaming down my face
and the feeling i use to get
is now just so empty
this cant be the end
the end of the power
the end of your love
my hands are now sour
from going over my scared arms
look what you've done
not only on the outside
but i dont dare to show you the inside
for if i do i will die
for all i have are the scares left behind
from you love
thats no longer
and its all down down hill from here
and i dont want to know
for i will explode
with the love i have no more
it has all turn to hate and pain
and now all this
i am no longer
safe from the rain
Copyright ©
lexxie
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2004-05-02 21:46:13]
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Re: no longer safe from the rain
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:02:34 PM AEST
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| This is good, i only suggest that you comment on more poems (then more people well comment on yours) |
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Re: no longer safe from the rain
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:41:15 PM AEST
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Loved your poem, filled with so much emotion.
Blessings
HOPE4ME2 |
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Re: no longer safe from the rain
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:54:56 PM AEST
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This is a good poem... lots of raw emotion shown here... keep writing and like lil angel says... comment on others poems and they will in turn ciomment on urs....
~Donna~ |
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Re: no longer safe from the rain
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:39:33 PM AEST
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Better days will come. The clouds will flee, the breeze will take them all away, and the sun will shine down on you once again.
Take care.
David |
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