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when my tears
Contributed by
superash16
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:54:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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when my tears
stream down,
the flow
is profound
when my tears
fall without permission,
i feel im in a
watered down prison
when my tears
drop gently,
they kiss me
oh so softly
when my tears
flow freely,
the hurt inside
leaves briskly
see, my tears
stopped coming.
because the hurt,
stopped hurting
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Re: when my tears
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by reprobate on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:33:41 AM AEST
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I liked it. It spawns an idea that i'll be working on.
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