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I Hate My Eyes
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:57:17 AM in AEST
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I hate my eyes
The ambiguous shades
Hiding a thousand stories
Wrapped in layers of suffering
You cant see my soul
My eyes
Dark and heavy
So many shades of brown
Too dark and small the letters are
No one can read a word
Symbols of a dead language
No one alive can speak the tongue
My eyes are no special possession
I try and hide them with beryl
But they still show through
My eyes never look real
No matter how hard I try to hide them
You can still see that they are false
So I sometimes keep them hidden
From the world underneath amber tones
that is why off and on what I hate most
Are my eyes
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Re: I Hate My Eyes
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by Broken-glass on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:57:59 AM AEST
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| Very good poem, I felt every word. Can't wait to read more of your work... |
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Re: I Hate My Eyes
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:43:21 AM AEST
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I've always had a fascination with eyes. They are a window to the soul. You're right sometimes, they're murky and nobody can see through the glass of the window. Hope you find some solace somehow.
Brilliant poem. Good write.
Bravo and encore
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: I Hate My Eyes
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by blueheart on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:35:17 AM AEST
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| Wow, you described the eyes so well. The poem has a deep meaning. Although I happen to like my eyes. Good poem, very descriptive. |
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Re: I Hate My Eyes
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by Bloodyrose on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:10:17 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. Eyes have always intrigued me. Keep up the good work. xoxo |
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