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Tangents
Contributed by
Funny_pants
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My thoughts are quantum, ever flowing, moving,
and tangents alway connect to the main theme
because when I scream and let loose the seem
and fall on the ground rolling and reeling
but never quite feeling the things that might
keep me awake tonight. I'll end the plight,
suffering and near-sight with some fore-sight
and I just might have to give up the fight
and see the light, foreshadow the plot
but it's not what you thought and all you sought
was to get what you got and not get caught
with your pants down and tied in a knot
and taking a shot isn't what it takes
but millions of fakes, fruity pebbles and frosted flakes
won't take what they make, for gods sake
don't forsake the great lake
of love stirring as your stomach quakes.
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2004-05-03 03:20:31]
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Re: Tangents
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by reprobate on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 04:22:17 AM AEST
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