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Don't
Contributed by
loyalist
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:46:29 AM in AEST
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Late I was awake
I was alone
she walked away
wait till I get dressed
and we'll fly awhile
winged birds them dancing
don't say she's in my head
when she's not
I am insulted
don't tell me not to stop
not to stall
on your doorstep
don't ask me how I feel
how to walk
on your heal
don't beg me not to stay
don't crawl
don't even squeal
there is bleeding in my heart
but theres none
thats on the surface
don't tell me not to scream
cuz I just might
anyway
don't look while I'm lurking
cuz my own
is my own I own
don't you have to be
in a war
out at sea
there are demons in my head
and there's some
want me dead
caves are all around
but I can't hide
I'm in the open
don't make me understand
make out to be
make me who I am
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loyalist
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2004-05-03 06:46:29]
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Re: Don't
(User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:13:16 AM AEST
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| This has a really good form, and it would definalty make an excellent song. The anger is very subtle yet hypocritically visible, and thats a really good trait to have in any anger poem. I didnt like some of the wording and flow in this but thats just personal opinion, 4/5 |
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Re: Don't
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:29:37 AM AEST
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| Aww..its a good lyric..a heart felt write..beautifully touching. venkat |
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