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Breaking Truth.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Poem after poem, day and night, I write.
Its some great addiction, to make me feel alright.
But inside Im rotten. I cant cover my scars.
I want to be let loose. But I dont think Ill get that far.
I hide my pain in secret, from the rest of the world.
No one knew I was blistering, up until now.
And I dont want to think, any more about this pain.
But theyre just pushing buttons, leaving a stain.
I need to be let loose, or jump in front of a car!
I dont want to be here, I want to fly to the stars.
Im breaking to pieces. I WANT TO GET OUT!
This is me; its what Im all about.
You provided the walls, but theyre breaking now.
I feel shattered, like Im gonna fall down.
You say youre here, but you never see.
The ashes and shadows, so you cant understand me!!
Dont tell me youre here help, I dont wanna no.
Im trapped in insanity, and I cant let go!
Ill keep on writing, though I cant see the why.
I dont feel any better. I just think of suicide.
Crushed between sublime, and things that may sort.
Im mixed up, cold and distraught.
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2004-05-03 12:09:00]
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Re: Breaking Truth.
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by bernard on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:15:04 PM AEST
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Deathdrop it sounds as if you have a real fit of depression go to a neurologist before it gets worse. There are drugs to help. I have to go quite often in the course of a year. I suffer from Parkinson's disease and depression is a terrible part of that illness.
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Re: Breaking Truth.
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by MikeTheFreak on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:05:03 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to this poem, so many people tryto help with my problems that they dont understand, hang in there u have a gift |
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