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fall of a soul
Contributed by
Blaq_rose
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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early morning
clock screams
jerks awake
goodbye dreams
out of her room
away from the lair
will anyone notice?
does anyone care?
morning sun
blazing away
off to school
another bad day
loses her homework
another "F"
daydreaming girl
wishing for death
rides the bus home
many too dumb to tell
she gets to go home
get bombarded with yells
she goes to her room
writes a few wills
then opens a bottle
and swallows the pills
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Re: fall of a soul
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by Archie on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:37:04 PM AEST
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| I have a comment. DON'T DO IT!!!!! if you are thinking of suicide talk to some one about it and if that is not a possibilty email me and I will try to help you! |
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Re: fall of a soul
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by ChichiriFreak on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:54:41 PM AEST
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| this is great poem...but if your thinking about doing that yourself..NOOOOO! DON'T DO IT!!! |
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Re: fall of a soul
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by RedRose on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:58:25 PM AEST
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| This is great Hopfully writing things like this is enough and you don't do it. Everyone goes through bad things just talk to someone. |
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