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The leaf
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:34:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A small leaf is dropped off a big boat in the middle of the Pacific
It tries and tries to get to shore
Every wave it gets closer
But things stop it
Fishing boats
Jet skies
Storms
A small boat comes by one day
Picked up the leaf is torn
Ripped and dirty
Its hugged and driven to shore
Never letting go of it
The leaf grows into a tree (just imagine it)
The tree bares fruit and nourishes the people
The little leaf was very grateful.
Jan 18th 2000
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lil_angel
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2004-05-03 15:34:14]
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Re: The leaf
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:10:49 AM AEST
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Nice write and great imagination.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The leaf
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:25:55 PM AEST
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| What a cute poem. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The leaf
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:30:49 PM AEST
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| this poem didnt really offer me anything creatively. i guess this is a very inspirational piece for idealism but i dont care for such pieces. your ending line i think is the best thing in this, because it seems so out of place and perplexing. also seems to tie this piece together. |
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