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Weak
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:32:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Slim fingers
With vains showing through
Hoping to be bigger
As the strong ones do
So much anger put inside
So that people can see
She has nothing to hide
With nothing to do
She is so weak
She wants to say something
But cant find the words to speak
The darkness surrounds her
With a bit of light showing through
The light waiting to open
The light that she knew
She needs to be strong
To see it clear
She can feel it
She can feel it near
Reach for the strong
Destroy the weak
Let out the blood
Let it leak
Melt your past
Your starting new
So you wont be weak
Youll be strong too
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2004-05-03 18:32:04]
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Re: Weak
(User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:42:51 PM AEST
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| Omg girl! -This isn't your only thing is it? I can feel your pain and am in your boat from time to time. You have so much to offer with your amazing poetry. You must be a wonderful girl and, don't be so hard on yourself. Do you have an eating disorder? The first part reminded me of myself to a certain degree. I keep some hidden poetry that has stuff like that embedded in it. Great work! |
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