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Broken
Contributed by
SeanMcHaney
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Give me a pill,
It will give me a thrill.
I'll give you sex,
I don't care,
I want to feel real.
Give me a weapon,
It'll give me a lesson.
I'll sell my soul,
I don't care,
I just want to kill.
Broken lost laid to waist,
The sea of conformity surrounds me,
Individuality is slain,
I am dying from the pain.
Give me a friend,
It'll give me reason to offend.
I don't really want to,
But it always happens in the end.
Give me a drink,
It'll drown me in my weary stink.
I'll give you money,
I don't care,
I want to die, disappear in a wink.
Broken lost laid to waist,
The sea of conformity surrounds me.
Individuality is slain.
I am dying from the pain.
Individuality is slain,
I am dying from the pain,
OH GOD! I am dying from the pain!
Individuality is slain,
Who am I now?
I am slain,
dying from the pain,
dying from the pain.
Sean McHaney
10-6-2K3
Copyright ©
SeanMcHaney
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2004-05-03 18:44:37]
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:02:11 AM AEST
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| NOw that was deep |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:25:54 AM AEST
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a deep well written plea, one of those that sounds absolutely brilliant read out loud very well done.
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Re: Broken
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:10:49 AM AEST
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A very powerful write, it sure does not lack emotion
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Re: Broken
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by Princesaazul16 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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Nice job. It's very deep and touching and strong. Keep up the good work. Hope to hear more.
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