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my broken soul
Contributed by
saha
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:50:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My broken soul
Lies in the shadows
In the middle of nowhere
Forsaken and frogotten
Cries for salvation
Lost in the darkness
Try to find a way to disappear
They say that I was wrong again
That I am blind on true
That I will never even know
When I'll lose myself in my dispair
Often finding myself thinking:
Why I can't go back
To believing in everything
And knowing nothing at all.
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saha
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2004-05-04 01:50:15]
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Re: my broken soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:33:52 AM AEST
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great poem i particulary enjoyed these last 2 lines:
To believing in everything
And knowing nothing at all.
Reminded me of childhood when everything seemed so much more fun. Nice one.
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Re: my broken soul
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by skinsfan on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:01:55 AM AEST
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| This is really good. Very well done. skinsfan |
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Re: my broken soul
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:32:57 AM AEST
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I know how you feel.
"During the darkest times of my life
If I shared and gave from my troubles
I hasd lessened all my strife
spent less time under the willow" |
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