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Parental Guidance Recommendation
Contributed by
Damon_Maynard
on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Mums and Dads;
Are you good ones or bad ones?
Are your kids happy or sad ones?
Do you leave them no choice but to find someone to follow?
Isnt your job description to be a role model?
Dont play him or her down because you claim theyre a handful,
Ignorance isnt bliss, try to set an example!
So dont push your minors,
With your in-home violence,
Defiance, drugged drink drive mindless,
Your one child in a six car pile up,
Running blood red primer,
This outcome is far from finest.
Shouldve given some more of your precious time,
Shouldve looked out, youd of seen the signs,
Of rebellion, bad parents? Im telling you,
A family of 3, now a family of 2.
Oh, now it comes around and youre inconsolable,
Your life off its axis and uncontrollable,
One lesson and a light above you head just clicked,
It sinks in; your kid wont be around this Christmas.
Get it? The worlds not all about you now is it?
Take a second to listen, and take the time to give a *****.
Copyright ©
Damon_Maynard
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2002-10-04 17:00:00]
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Re: Parental Guidance Recommendation
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 05:19:40 PM AEST
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good write, powerful i think
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Re: Parental Guidance Recommendation
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by Daniel on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 05:27:14 AM AEST
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much as i love the theme of the message here, it's a bit hard to really say something truthfully from your viewpoint until you become a parent yourself. alas i am far from it, so i can shuttup now. good insightful write here man. kudos! ;0)
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Re: Parental Guidance Recommendation
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 07:09:54 AM AEST
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Great write, Damon.... made a lot of sense..
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Re: Parental Guidance Recommendation
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by Emil on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 11:16:56 AM AEST
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'Though the poem is general, it gets the message through, clear, dramatic.
Say no to sugar-coatin!! Good job! ;-) |
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