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Colorful
Contributed by
juliette
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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A world once seen in black and white
In the darkness slowly comes to light
Memories of another place in time
Illuminate the bland skyline
A blustery wind blows colors around
Their glittering dust coats the ground
Covering all of the browns and grays
With a rainbow of reasons to be glad for today
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2004-05-04 12:00:43]
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Re: Colorful
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:09:08 PM AEST
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| this wasnt lousy... how dare you say that!! it was sweet and made a valid point... keep it up :) and have a little more confidence in yourself... :) |
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Re: Colorful
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:31:12 PM AEST
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scattered thoughts sometimes breed something more cohesive, it may seem lousy but it's mostly needed. good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Colorful
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:43:28 PM AEST
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You and I evidently dont have the same definition for lousy!! :)
This was perfect, so beautifully painted with perfect words. Great write, I enjoyed it. |
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