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If you please
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:01:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If you touch me now;
it will run through me when nothing else does,
If you smile at me now;
it will be the last thing i see,
If you say you love me now;
i will keep them for eternity.
we will lay on this floor together,
and pretend that it is home,
i will close my eyes forever,
and i'll never be alone.
Copyright ©
ZooYork_Chick
... [
2004-05-04 12:01:16]
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Re: If you please
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:49:45 PM AEST
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i like this.. i found it quite mysterious but definitely an enjoyable read..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: If you please
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:03:03 PM AEST
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This is intriguingl. Hmmm, would have liked for it to be longer.
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Re: If you please
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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*grins* if i return those words to you, will you keep me?!? lol, beautiful write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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