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Under Blizzard Skies
Contributed by
reprobate
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Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:21:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Cold winter's bitterness bites ever so deep
The wrap of cloth and down offers meager respite
Unwilling feet plot where they'll tread next
In the lonely dark, hangs the call of hearth and home.
Recognize the passing seasons of the heart
The sole desire, to void the lonely cold
Will this blustery assault ever cease
Can the vision of home renew the spirit?
Thoughts play back and forth of then and now
Was it something said or done, or maybe not
Dark colored wishes for answers...Be home soon
So very cold, tonight. Damn, it's really cold!
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reprobate
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2004-05-04 20:21:28]
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Re: Under Blizzard Skies
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:29:27 PM AEST
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Depression is a hard thing to get through, Mike. In that state everyone feels alone no matter how many people you have around you. The sad part is it affects those around you also. Even though you try hard to keep it from doing so. Strong heart, strong will and strong mind will pull you through. If it lasts more than a few weeks I would seek medical advice.
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Re: Under Blizzard Skies
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:32:53 PM AEST
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"Thoughts play back and forth of then and now" Very apt description of how depression repeats over and over in one's mind. "Dark colored wishes for answers" I really relate to that line. It seems that depression is a very large affliction lately. Wonder why? Anyhow, I think you put this very well. I look forward to reading more of your writes.
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Re: Under Blizzard Skies
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:59:48 PM AEST
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i have walked that path of loneliness many times, it is
a tangible thing, almost a friend, ....tho home always
comes into view once again, great images here, a truly moving write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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