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In the End
Contributed by
Black13
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:16:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When shadows whisper in the ears of a fallen angel;
bringing downpours of tears from heavens' broken tomb.
In those times when jesters fail to find laughter.
Roses refuse to bloom in faded dying sunsets' gloom.
A time that stood still leaving broken hearts unmended.
Selflessly fighting a battle that couldn't avoid being selfish.
As no tears seem able to find your eyes when needed.
Always finding a new mask beneath the one just shed.
When loved ones abandon and god stops answering.
If even darkness' shadow fades to rasping laughter.
And all the chivalrous knights fail to save even themselves.
Everything twists to outright pain that won't depart your haggard life.
Living when depression won't befriend your miserable life;
Not even able to find yourself in the bottom of a bottle.
Appeasing stern enticements still won't satisfy the void inside,
and the emptiness so callously playing Russian roulette with your heart.
Copyright ©
Black13
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Re: In the End
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:22:21 AM AEST
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Wow that is so well written.
well done. |
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Re: In the End
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by arden on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:25:55 AM AEST
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oh wow black.....
this time it was you that almost brought me to tears. (but you didnt lol :P)
filled with deep dark raw emotion and sadness. a true masterpiece.
i loved this.
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Re: In the End
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:40:58 AM AEST
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| Great imagery..venkat |
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Re: In the End
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:08:47 AM AEST
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this is written so well, excellent work. I enjoyed your joint write with Arden by the way.
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Re: In the End
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:34:37 AM AEST
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| Wonderful imagery, very very well written. |
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Re: In the End
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:57:49 AM AEST
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Powerfully moving. So much despair here, but said with such wisdom. Heartbreaking.
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Re: In the End
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by lexxie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:40:06 AM AEST
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this is one of the best i've read loved it
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Re: In the End
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:00:43 PM AEST
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Excellent portrayal of lost souls and lives. Must be a deep chasm of blackness that is hard to ever climb out of. I have seen people succeed though. Sadly so many don't even try and get lost in that black aloneness.
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Re: In the End
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 12:34:20 AM AEST
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| wow its almost like the battle of good and bad within yourself ....... just have faith... everything gets better... the world is in a tough spot right now... just about a quarter way thru the dark tunnel... its gotta get darker before its get brighter... nice right... filled with emotion and vivid images of gloom.... |
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