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Punk Show (4000 Watts)
Contributed by
Butterat_zool
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:57:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Forty forgotten youths, cooped up
in the back of the alleyway
dance club, where that hepatitis
scare happened in 98, chant in
ultimate cosmic dissonance with
the rest of all being.
Swinging their unwashed hair
with the force of the titans,
these lost virgins fight tooth
and nail to out-scream, out-sound,
and out-sacrifice their saviors
on stage.
Funneling their sweaty tears through
the blood in their noses, they
abandon hope, sanity, and personal
security for something worth
the trade: a fleeting moment of
sweet salvation and praise.
Copyright ©
Butterat_zool
... [
2004-05-05 02:57:49]
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Re: Punk Show (4000 Watts)
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by Crys on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:42:00 PM AEST
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| Very interesting, and sadly true. Another impressive write. Great job! *~*Crys*~* |
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Re: Punk Show (4000 Watts)
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by boricuacd on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:32:02 PM AEST
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| Good Poem! |
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Re: Punk Show (4000 Watts)
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:28:38 PM AEST
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| Interesting topic to write a poem about. I like it! |
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