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Deadly Deviate
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:53:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm a deadly deviate, knowing no shame
Killing for pleasure, is my game
The joy I feel, when I see the pain
As I start to torture, start to maim
I get a rush, as I hear them scream
Losing their minds, I'm, their worst dream
Feeling them shake, as their nerves I control
Seeing them go numb, as I empty their soul
Their eyes see nothing, staring so blank
As into their brains, I have sank
I'm in their system, it's a wonderful hit
I've created another, heroin addict
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parkman
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2004-05-05 08:53:13]
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Re: Deadly Deviate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:02:30 AM AEST
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This is a really dark truth about addiction. It kills soooooo many! The only hope is...survival. Nicely done!
Angel always... godspeed...joni |
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Re: Deadly Deviate
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:15:23 PM AEST
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| Very dark, deep poem. Harsh and truthful. I like it. |
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Re: Deadly Deviate
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:29:30 PM AEST
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| very vivid. excellent write. |
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