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My friend brought me to today...
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Another day been brought
The sun is shining strong
The wind is flowing in a frenzy
And yet we still stand tall
Our tears from yesterday have drowned
in a puddle of its own
No more need for petty worries
as we go and carry on
The world is full beauty
no more need to feel alone
There's love among our friends right here
and with them there's no need to fear
They'll protect us when in trouble
and fight away our fears
They'll be our knight in shining armor
and stand by us thru all the years
Our friends will never leave our side
Despite any disarray
Even when the sun shines bright
its our friends that bring us that new day...
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-05-05 09:21:53]
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:27:10 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful and uplifting poem Jenny...
I love it. |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:31:06 AM AEST
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Good poem I like the optimismus in it. great write.
bernard |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:59:32 AM AEST
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Outside of missing a word here and there I liked this.
It had a certain strength to it.
Good, very good. |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:26:20 AM AEST
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Morning, Sweet Pea, I love this. Full of hope and optimism. Keep up the sunshine work.
Rita |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:22:02 PM AEST
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NO WONDER SO MANY PEOPLE LIKE YOU!
YOU'RE JUST SO NICE JENNY!! THE POEM HITS RIGHT HOME RIGHT IN THE HEART!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:40:00 PM AEST
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wonderful poem
just so sunny and optimistic!! |
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Re: My friend brought me to today...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:44:57 PM AEST
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this is an awesomely, beautyfull write.
I'm so happy to see u writing happy.
It breaks my heart to see anyone in agony and depressed.
Keep up the good work as your write will encourage many others to look to the brite side of things. It's hard to stay positive with our planet being how it is but if u look hard enuff u can find beauty in all things.
with the written word we are so fortunate as we can cheer someone up or bring um down.
Our global family here might take some rough waves but we can find our way to shore if we rufuse to give up.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace,
emy
Great job and u r so good at happy. Makes my heart smile. |
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