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Her World
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Her world is foggy
And chaotic
Petsered by dreams
And bleeding questions
They beat her down
And make her feel their mistakes
The mistakes that she's been paying for
Since birth
Her heart remains cold
Only empty memories remain there
She wants them to remember
What she can't forget
She never asked for life
She never wanted to be here
Yet they scream and abuse
And all the fault lies on her
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MyLastBreath
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2004-05-05 11:18:58]
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Re: Her World
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:33:52 AM AEST
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| Haaah! This brought tears to my eyes. Very strong- in simple words. I felt the pain as I read the poem. Very well done! |
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Re: Her World
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 11:43:00 AM AEST
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| very morbid, but the truth still lies within it. its an open truth which happens across the world. if you know this girl, pass it on that i hope it stops, even if you say its from you. if you don't, then you don't. i like how you've done it. |
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Re: Her World
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:35:33 PM AEST
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| very sad write... thanks for sharing... |
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