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Across the Sea
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:37:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hint of mysteries washed ashore
Foaming waters dance across my toes
Rocks left behind by winter storms
Clatter softly a secret song
While gulls sing in harmony
My eyes look out across the sea
Where you live beyond my reach
Inside the dream, deep in my soul
You walk along a rocky beach
Looking west while I look east
Fate has placed you in my path
Dare I walk into your arms?
To taste the kiss of lovers feast
Cold wind blows my dreams around
I watch the sea turn blue, gray, green
Waves crash with rushing sound
The cold Atlantic Sea a screen
Our passions kept apart
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-05 14:37:16]
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Re: Across the Sea
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:46:00 PM AEST
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Your visuals are outstanding! Once again you wow me!
Laurie |
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Re: Across the Sea
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:50:07 PM AEST
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| such a beautiful and sad write. i can really relate. i thought it was wonderful. |
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Re: Across the Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:11:16 PM AEST
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it sounds so dreamy and devine gaille, what i wouldnt give right this minute to be on the shore instead of in this heat, i do miss seagulls, boo hoo lol, i promise to catch up on your other poems soon:) hugs n' love spirit sister, nessa
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