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Floating Away
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sitting in the front seat of the car
Speeding by all signs
in no particular direction
Letting go from all troubles on my mind
And not worrying
about what I forgot to mention
I don't feel the wind on my skin
But I get a clear scent of speed
Not anymore being lost
in carrying for somebody else
Now I know just what I need
For someone so ungrateful
I would've given my life before
But when I realized how
fast I was floating away
I decided to stop taking it slow
Almost gave you a chance to escape
But I pulled out first
Though sad, but nonetheless aware
I wasn't enough to satisfy your thirst
So here I am, driving on
Not letting in you or any regret
I will cherish the happy moments
And with a smile move on from what was bad
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
... [
2004-05-05 17:20:40]
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Re: Floating Away
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:42:11 PM AEST
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| it must have taken a lot of strength to walk away but it seems like it was for the best. i like the fact that at the end you seem to have a positive outlook to the future. it just reinforces how strong you really are and that's very admirable as is your talent for writing poems |
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Re: Floating Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 05:46:01 AM AEST
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I like this. You have an attractive way with phrases and expressing yourself, which is apparent in this piece.
Well done. |
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