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Weird
Contributed by
lifefliesby
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I do not see you eye to eye
I do not see you eating you pie
I am not scared of a caboose
I cannot ryhme like Doctor Suess
But I can stand alone and proud
And I can speak my word aloud
I can even tell you what I think
Or even why I write in ink
I can tell you who I am
And why I think that I love ham
But I cannot tell who you are
Or why you stare up at the stars
Or why you smile so big and bright
Whenever you go out at night
I can only wonder who
Is reading this and thinking too
Who am I and who is he?
And this is a long rhyming spree
Copyright ©
lifefliesby
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2004-05-05 17:45:30]
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Re: Weird
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:47:28 PM AEST
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I think ambiguous fits this topic.
Have fun on your quest to find the answers to your questions.
Great poem.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Weird
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:00:59 PM AEST
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| nice writing. i liked the part with doctor suess for some reason. i guess its because no one can never rhyme like him, or invent words such as he has done. |
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Re: Weird
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by New_York_Chick on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 07:37:48 PM AEST
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| cool |
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