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I'm Listening to Music in the Rain
Contributed by
phildel
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Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I am watching a rainbow cast an eye,
Over a great, silk, sun forgotten sky,
And a fragile spiral of smokey gray
Is making it's own melancholy way,
Over the distant city to my house,
Now should I strike up a bright flame to douse?
For now I sense the rain grows wilder still,
Enough spirit to dampen nights sweet trill
Sweeping, miraculous, electric throng,
So instead I shall play my own sweet song,
Listening with a face up against the glass,
I hear pelting of rain with colours of brass,
And as I sit revived, a fresher bright soul,
Swallows this moment and re-creates me whole,
So sitting in the gloomy haze, I am once more sane,
Finally I am listening, to music, in the rain.
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phildel
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2002-10-05 09:30:00]
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Re: I'm Listening to Music in the Rain
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by Lia on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 09:35:43 AM AEST
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| There is a metal awning over my bedroom window..when it rains..it plays a melody. Real quite beautiful to lay in bed at night and listen to it. This poem is great..captures the moment quite well |
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Re: I'm Listening to Music in the Rain
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by trinity_love500 on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 10:46:26 AM AEST
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Described so nicely!! Beautiful...
Trinity L |
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Re: I'm Listening to Music in the Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:24:26 PM AEST
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Good poem. I particularly liked the way you described the gloom of the rainstorm,
as a
"great, silk, sun forgotten sky"
Really vivid.
Thanks for sharing. |
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