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Everlasting life
Contributed by
Archie
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Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:04:44 PM in AEST
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Can't you hear your father calling?
Come on into everlasting life.
Theres a mansion waiting for you,
at the end of all these trials and strife.
When you're finished with your journey,
there will be a rest for your souls.
You will drop your heavy burdens
and never have to carry them no more.
(Chorus) Everlasting life Everlasting life
In this life there is much trouble.
There are many tears and many griefs.
There is pain and theres destruction
there are many quarrels in the streets;
but where Jesus Christ is waiting
there will be struggles no more.
We will gladly change and enter
into the Lord's gracious courts
(Chorus)
For those bible scholars out there. Can you tell me what book and 3 chapters I am speaking about.
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: Everlasting life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:07:29 PM AEST
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| I thought this was very beautiful. Thank you so very much |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:09:20 PM AEST
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| wonderful. really do wish i could hear it |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:15:53 PM AEST
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| That's pretty cool. TOo bad we can't hear it. |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:42:38 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:55:15 PM AEST
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| nice song. nd im not a biblical scholar in the least, so i am unable to tell you. |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:17:13 PM AEST
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This is worth every minute spent on it.. Great lyrics.....
Jenni |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:42:38 AM AEST
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| Are you a musician? I wouldn't mind hearing this - even though I am areligious, the lyrics are cohesive enough to believe the music behind it would be at least melodic. I would have liked you to expand the mansion metaphor a little more, however - one of my favourite poems has this metaphor worked around a magickal forest. Anyway - a competent write. |
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Re: Everlasting life
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by spooky on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:51:17 AM AEST
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| one day we will hear this,,me and my brothers write gospel music and we were on tv in west virginia, a gospel station,,never give up what GOD has given you ,,a friend in words spooky,,i myself have some reliious poems also,,ceck them out,,o cmment if you dont want to,, |
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