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My Pain is Under Key
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You really do like me and I really can tell
I understand your pain
I can feel it from within
You want me to explain myself
To open up and spill
I cannot do that!
I will not do that!
I oppose ! So that you know!
No one gets in!
My pain is under key
You want to help me
But I will not let you in!
Nobody gets in!
I will not allow it!
I lost my key
There are no more spares
Im locked in by myself
Crouching in a corner
Not wanting anymore help
I know that Ive hurt you
The pain is deep
Your door is unlocked for me
I understand your need
I know how you feel
My words are harsh
But I do not Love You
You are a friend,
A friend that cares,
A friend that has no key
To my pain that is buried
Behind that door.
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pyrofungus
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2004-05-05 18:23:22]
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Re: My Pain is Under Key
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:38:48 PM AEST
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| how often we do that to ourselves we lock our selves away for one reason or another to hide out troubles and our pain. great great write keep it up i love it |
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Re: My Pain is Under Key
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by Dragontear27 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:35:07 PM AEST
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| very good poem. You should maybe learn to trust peole a ll bit more though some can hurt you some maybe be able to help. Keep up the good writing. |
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