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Just To
Contributed by
valek
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:29:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just to hear your voice again
just to feel your breath on my skin
just to taste your sweat
just to make you wet
just to breathe you in
just to be where you've been
just to hold your hand
just to lay with you in the sand
just to sleep with you at night
just to have you in my sight
just to grasp all that you have to bring
just for one more second with you..........
i would give up everything
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valek
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2004-05-06 11:29:13]
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Re: Just To
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by apollo on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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| sad but true, sometimes we want what we can not have. good luck in finding that someone hopefully they will come to you. |
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Re: Just To
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:43:50 PM AEST
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methinks you already have given up everything, at least in a sense. still, this is good i love the devotion in it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Just To
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by footballjon51 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:35:43 PM AEST
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| nice that was really deep i liked it a lot |
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