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Queen Of The Sea
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 12:12:57 PM in AEST
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She was a wonderous sight, a floating palace
People queuing up, for her maiden voyage
Staring in awe, at this queen of sea
Never suspecting, what their fate would be
When all were aboard, her klaxon did sound
Setting sail on her journey, for New York bound
The people all merry, dancing and drinking
Having no idea, they soon would be sinking
All was going well, gracefully steaming along
The captain being pushed, to make a decision so wrong
A fatal mistake, as she crossed the Atlantic at night
Going too fast to avoid, the iceberg now within sight
A loud crash and this beauty, shudders to a halt
Who was to blame, who was at fault
The power went down, everyone was screaming
As she started to groan, tilting and heaving
Lifeboats were lowered, women and children first
Trying to escape, from this oceans great thirst
Her nose went down, causing a huge wave
Suddenly she snapped, swallowed, to her grave
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parkman
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2004-05-06 12:12:57]
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Re: Queen Of The Sea
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by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:15:46 PM AEST
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a beautful and yet very sad write.
so wonderfully written.
i am in awe of your work.
i loved this.
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Re: Queen Of The Sea
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:32:48 PM AEST
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one of these days i'll like this story... but somehow it hasn't grown on me yet. good writing style though, really... ;0)
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