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No More Pain
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 12:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm a spirit, I am free From this life, that tormented me I swallowed some pills, with a drink My mind's now clear, I can think No more pain, no more sorrow Now today, there's no tomorrow No more fear, no more worry No more rushing, no more hurry Stop the wishing, stop the lying I, myself, will stop the crying I'm so happy, though you're so sad I'm a free spirit, for me, please be glad
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Re: No More Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:12:53 PM AEST (User
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i loved this.
the flow was awesome.
a really powerful dark poem.
amazing write.
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Re: No More Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:13:11 PM AEST (User
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i'm glad for you... i remembere writing like awhile back, reading this reminds me of tons... i like this, it's good! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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