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Your only friend
Contributed by
Cursed_Witch
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hello again dear friend,
Are you looking for me?
Why are you staring at me like that?
Aren't you happy to see me?
I haven't seen you since that last time,
When you got so angry and
Locked me up to get away from me
Why are you crying?
Tell me what's wrong?
Is it me, is it life?
Look at you now, begging for my help
I thought I was weak but you prove me wrong
It is daring, isn't it?
You and I face to face
I'm talking to you,
Look at me, don't turn away
Stop asking me why,
I have no answers; I AM your only answer
You keep asking me, what are you going to do?
Don't! Just pull my trigger
Copyright ©
Cursed_Witch
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2004-05-06 13:00:03]
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Re: Your only friend
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:32:24 PM AEST
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| wow, suicide, through the gun's eyes......very creative!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Your only friend
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:57:28 PM AEST
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oi vey... dark writing, good stuff yet quite dark. i'm mixed upon this one.
~Remy~ |
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Re: Your only friend
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:39:11 PM AEST
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Interesting write..... great personification...
Jenni |
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Re: Your only friend
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by discantbelife on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 03:40:31 PM AEST
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i lovedddd it keep up the good job...
Kisses Yanique |
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Re: Your only friend
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:44:47 PM AEST
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insightfully weird, quite clever, hugs n' love nessa
@->>-:- |
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Re: Your only friend
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:48:08 PM AEST
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| Wonderful |
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Re: Your only friend
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by saphfyre on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:17:32 AM AEST
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| This is the best analogy I have seen... I had no idea what it was about until the end and then suddenly, the entire poem came into focus. It became so powerful all of a sudden ....like a bang would |
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