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Dancing with Adrianne
Contributed by
Brie
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Lushious lovely lady in red
Seducing me unknowingly.
Do you know I lust after you?
Like a silver thread of air, your always
slipping
through my fingertips.
Its ok, I don't really want to hold you.
Your a comfort to me,
somethine to distract,
and boy, do you do it well.
Smile at me some more,
ask me about my day;
let me follow the curve of the
tattoed vine across
your chest.
Dancing around the room I
watch you,
seeking you out.
If I blink too fast, you might be gone.
Can i grind against you?
Copyright ©
Brie
... [
2004-05-06 14:00:37]
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Re: Dancing with Adrianne
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:10:52 PM AEST
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oi vey... that last line just killed it! so ghetto... lmao! oh geez, what am i saying?!? ugh. *regains composure* nice write, minus the ending question! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Dancing with Adrianne
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by Harlot on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:48:49 PM AEST
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| yes i agree... darling it was very beautiful.. last line wasnt needed. Keep it up |
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