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Be still my beating heart
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Be still my beating heart
be still...
of what glories of enruptured dreams
of what motives do I have to live
of what hopes upon which to breathe
of what indigence upon which to believe
be still...
no more beatings to guile's deceitful ploy
no more of that repetitive ungentle drum
no more pertaining to life's impossible joy
no more tendings to that incessent hum
be still...
let hot blood cool within your chambers
let life's echo loom to a distant whisper
let your valves unspool from unceasing labors
let silence replace your pulsing rancour
be still my beating heart
be still...
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Baronhawk
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2004-05-06 14:09:48]
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Re: Be still my beating heart
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:24:33 PM AEST
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*thinking* cuz of your little aside i'm not sure how to read this poetic dream pool... i like it. does that count as a comment? lol... good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Be still my beating heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:16:23 PM AEST
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I think life would be horribly hopeless if it weren't for the gentle beating of love's heart and the sweet murmurings that come along with it. Beautiful write, my friend.
Rita |
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Re: Be still my beating heart
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:11:23 PM AEST
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Baronhawk,
Your poem is in a league of its own. The words you placed forth reflects the poetic maturity and the skill of being able to put your emotions into words perfectly. It truly is a beautiful poem, I am left captivated. |
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Re: Be still my beating heart
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by venkat on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:04:11 AM AEST
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| Good work...I am at loss of words. venkat |
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Re: Be still my beating heart
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:05:08 PM AEST
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So BaronHawk what have you been up to these days? Thank you so much for your encouraging comments, even tho I couldn't return the same.
I have a word for this great poem. Estatic!
Quite different from the norm.......so original in thought and form!
I've read it three times already, and will again. It seems to grow on you!
You write wonderful poetry my friend.
love
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