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Secret Lover
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:18:14 PM in AEST
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Ruffling of feathers, mine
Every time you question me
Anxious to be alone, leave me
Let me sit here in my solitude
Twisting strands of words
Carefully written in pretty books
My dreams and loves
Collecting dust on the shelves
While you ruffle my feathers
With your annoying cloying tendencies
Suffocating me as I sit here quietly
Unrepentant, I do not love you
My mouth full of ashes and lies
To keep the peace and stay alive
Endurance to live one more day
Keeping my eye on the pages
Filling up with words of hope
That someday loves fire will burn
Bonfire, passion and excitement return
His name whispered on my lips
A kiss as welcome as summer rain
He lives on the page in the words
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-06 18:18:14]
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Re: Secret Lover
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by Remy on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:34:47 PM AEST
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hum, peculiar way of putting it... but i think i'm catching on to it... hope he lives beyond the page as well... ;0)
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Re: Secret Lover
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:44:20 PM AEST
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You will make me cry yet. Stop this! There is too much emotion here, and it is all too familiar. Our lunch date, I think, is long overdue.
Stitch |
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Re: Secret Lover
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:06:59 PM AEST
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Hopefully someday he won't be a secret. This is a great poem.
Rita |
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Re: Secret Lover
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:57:17 AM AEST
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| this was very pleasant, we know how you feel, follow your heart... x |
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Re: Secret Lover
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:29:13 PM AEST
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I find this sad my friend, yet I feel a touch of Merry devilishness in it at the end. As always you find the way to let the reader enter your mind and see what you see.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Secret Lover
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:07:37 PM AEST
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enchanting, gaille, and hauntingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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