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The Piano
Contributed by
Wicked
on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The keys ever so gently play out the melody
You close your eyes and get lost to it completely
The song so sad, one mind, one soul
Never again complete,never to be whole
You hear a persons heart pour out as if bleeding
The pain so soft yet you grasp their entire feelings
The striking of a chord, tears at your insides
Its as if one final, hard, gripping of goodbye
You open your eyes to see the dust settled on the piano
It was a lost memory, a ghost if you will of someones sorrow
Of what once was, and may yet again be
A yesterday's tomorrow? I guess we will soon see
Copyright ©
Wicked
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2004-05-06 21:26:27]
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Re: The Piano
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:40:43 PM AEST
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| This one really did bring back a lot of memories. I used to have a friend that played the piano exceptionally well and is working towards being a pro player. In fact the first poem I posted on this site was about her piano playing skills. Lovely poem flowing with emotion. Great job. |
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Re: The Piano
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by Sonibe on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:27:59 PM AEST
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....amazing!....I know this feeling....I play piano, and when I get into my music....there's almost no use in trying to stop me....
....Music by piano....it's one way to open one's heart and others' as well....I love it....and I say, Bravo, Bravo....truly good write....keep up the music....
Straight out of Treble,
Sonibe |
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Re: The Piano
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:51:15 PM AEST
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| this was an excellent example that all should strive to write as well. |
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