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Except Me
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:42:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Deceived by a hallucination That youll be here with me Clinging to a delusion That you actually care I sit here in despair And wonder why you cant see What you do to me How come I cant Draw myself away Move on Forget you And live my own Brighter day But without you My life Just seems so empty Whos gonna Win this battle over me Why cant I tell you That you tear me apart Maybe its because You hold my heart And you do actually care Causing me some pain You couldnt bear So youd walk away Not knowing what Youd do to Wayne I wonder if its better To love But never see Or to have But not quite My life will never Work out right You try to please Everybody In doing that Youre bound to forget Somebody Too bad They cared the most That somebody was me Why do you focus On those youll never please Giving yourself Trying to satisfy their greed Ignoring the fact That youre all They should ever need Till you realize this Ill always be cursed By my hopeless wish That you Might feel The same way I do That you Might love me too You felt some love And immediately shut down Somehow youre comfortable When love aint around You think everythings fine Cause it all seems cool When will you realize A broken heart Doesnt make a sound Cause Im dying inside And nobody knows it Except me
Wayne Wende
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Re: Except Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:24:22 PM AEST (User
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Wayne, this poem was really sweet and kewl. I liked it alot and it made me want to sing the Lion King song when Mufassa has that bird in the cage and it starts to sing,"Nobody knows the trouble i've seen, nobody knows my sorrow!" LOL! sorry but it did and i still like it and i believe that if u read a poem you had better comment on it and I hate seeing a poem that has been read and has no comments at all. |
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Re: Except Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST (User
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I agree this is a great poem, you say what it is your trying to convey in such a simple and pleasant manner. really enjoyed reading!!! A++++ |
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