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If I should die
Contributed by
jonteD
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Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 05:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I should die now who would be at wake,
Come and eat and drink at my demise,
Please do for heavens sake,
Tell tales of times past, all lies.
You never really knew me,
Should have looked at sad me within,
Perhaps studied beyond my glee,
To the bad man who wronged, all sin.
I shall now sleep for ever and a day,
But no one will miss my light that shone,
Down deep in the ground always to lay,
Never to be seen again, all gone.
Copyright ©
jonteD
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2002-10-05 17:15:00]
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Re: If I should die
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:51:26 PM AEST
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Someone out there would miss you. All the poets here would miss your poems. This was a great write....
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Re: If I should die
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 11:33:20 AM AEST
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| i like this poem but i just want you to know there is always someone that will love you unconditionly and that person is god. if you give him a chance he can make all your emptiness and hate go away. keep writting. |
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Re: If I should die
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by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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| good poem!! i like it a lot. no matter how terrible you've done in life, someone is always bound to miss you and one person counts |
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