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A Fiend In Need - Is A Fiend Indeed
Contributed by
Coquillion
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:34:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the young girl hurried home, upon a bleak mid-winters night, a demon stepped from the shadows into the moons pale light
It regarded her with fiery eyes. It hissed and snapped its jaws. It spread its blood red, leathery wings and clicked its deadly claws.
The demon hopped towards her. She smelt its putrid breath. The girl stood still and waited for the moment of her death.
But the moment never came, in fact the demon smiled I mean no harm? ( it rumbled ) I would not hurt you child!?
The demon knelt before her and to the girls surprise it recounted such a tale of woe as tears fell from its eyes.
I was human once? ( it said ) But by a warlocks spell Im cursed to wear this body and to spend my days in hell.?
But youre the key? (the demon said) to all which I desire a lock of hair, freely given, is all that I require.?
Then shall this curse be lifted and I shall be set free, with my heart, my soul and body the way they used to be.?
The young girl was so saddened that, for its lost souls sake, she held out a lock of golden hair for the demon beast to take.
It cut the hair with a razor claw and it was O so gently placed among a hundred other locks of hair in a pouch about its waist.
But even as it thanked her the young girl grew concerned For the demons gentle manner changed and its evil face returned.
I said I wouldnt hurt you?, said the demon with a sigh But I have a demons nature and Demons ALWAYS lie.?
You see the lock of hair you gave has no magic lest youre dead.? And with that the deceitful demon bit off the young girls head.
And as the demon flew away it was still consumed with hate But there were many lonely girls to find and sad tales to relate.
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2004-05-07 10:34:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Fiend In Need - Is A Fiend Indeed
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:23:52 PM AEST (User
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I adore poetry that tells of a story. Oh, and I do adore yours. -props- |
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Re: A Fiend In Need - Is A Fiend Indeed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:29:33 PM AEST (User
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amazing, well done! i cant beleive more people have not yet commented.. oh well, great write! |
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