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Scared
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:53:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Scared
To come near me
To feel my cold breath
On your face
The icy tears
The icy fears
How can you
Stand so far away
When i'm over here
Bleeding
Bleeding for you
Scars that i cant undo
Whats so scary
That makes you back away
Do you know
How much it hurts
That you cant be near me
I feel so lonely
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2004-05-07 11:53:34]
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Re: Scared
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:47:50 PM AEST
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| Great write! This is really good, great job! |
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Re: Scared
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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| i like this. i can kinda relate to it too..especially the last 4 lines.."do you know, how much it hurts, that you cant be near me, i feel so lonely" so sad. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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